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College Composition Students Discuss Their Internet Reading and Writing
Surprise, these students all read books.
Maybe I’m being dramatic, but I know after some days of checking email, reading websites, responding to student blogs, and dropping in on the various social media sites I participate in, I feel way more anxious and scatterbrained than usual. It’s a feeling Nicholas Carr notes too in his book The Shallows: What the Internet is Doing to Our Brains.
Several of the writers I’m working with this semester at St. John’s University joined me to discuss their upcoming literacy autobiographies within the context of Carr’s book. Here’s some highlights of our conversation and a link to where I’ve published our discussion.
Shawn is a business management major who is also a baseball player. Although during the podcast, Shawn seems to take the side of reading around on the internet over reading books, he ends the program by recommending us to the writer and chef Anthony Bourdain who has written Kitchen Confidential and Medium Raw.
Elizabeth takes science courses even though she doesn’t much like science and she spends hours reading around on Wikipedia. She also suggested a book to read at the end of the show: Cloud Atlas by David Mitchell.
Jessi seems happy to be a pharmacy major and wants to someday own a lime green Volkswagen Beetle. She speaks highly of Tumblr and recommends the magna Bleach.
Here are a few of the lines we discuss from Nicholas Carr’s The Shallows:
“Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now I zip along the surface like a guy on a Jet Ski” (7).
“As soon as you learn to be a ‘skilled hunter’ online, he [O’Shea] argues, books become superfluous” (9).
“Calm, focused, undistracted, the linear mind is being pushed aside by a new kind of mind that wants and needs to take in and dole out information in short, disjointed, often overlapping bursts–the faster, the better” (10).
You can download the complete audio podcast here or search for us via “Digital Book Club” on iTunes.
Writing Group Lesson Plans for College Composition Class
The writers in my classes regularly get into groups and read their writing to one another. If left to their own devices about what to do in these groups, the students are usually either very quiet or they point out what they see as errors. In the spirit of trying generate conversation, we read an except from Peter Elbow’s Writing Without Teachers. During the class before the small group workshops, we practiced the methods outlined by Elbow as a whole class. There were two brave students who agreed to read their work aloud to the class. We talked about the text after the reading using the directions below.
- The entire essay gets read out loud by the writer or someone the writer chooses.
- Everyone should “listen” with a pen and, as Elbow says, “point” to words and phrases that get into your skull. Mark these spots as you read or listen.
Complete 3-7 silently in your daybook and then share.
- When the piece is completed, everyone takes time to silently write ½ page in their daybook that describes the “movie of their mind” that occurred as they listened to the piece.
- Summarize the main points of the article by writing a sentence in your daybook.
- Choose a word from the text that summarizes it.
- Choose a word NOT in the text that summarizes it.
- Write a metaphor for the piece. If it the essay were (an article of clothing, weather, terrain, an instrument, or anything else you can thing of) what would it be? In other words, I might say, “Jerry’s piece was a tornado.”
As you share 3-7 with your group, hopefully conversation will arise.
- You don’t need to write it in your daybook, but how did the writer do when it came to a title, signal phrases, parenthetical citations, and a works cited page? Can you help each other with any of these things?
After all the pieces have been read and discussed
- Write at least ½ page in your daybook answering the following. Explain how the group went today. What suggestion do you have for improving the group’s interaction? What went well? What needs work? What does the work have you thinking about? What do you think needs to happen next with your essay?
As expected, the groups were slow to start but the students began to relax and talk more as the class went on. I think I had the students writing too much in their daybooks. The writing took awhile and I think it killed the conversation. I think an adjustment would be to have the students write everything that is above except for the movie of the mind. Someone could just speak that and students could offer their own thoughts in comparison to the one movie of the mind that is shared.
The students bring four copies of the paper to class. One of those goes to me. I think next time I’ll have the students write on the drafts instead of in their own daybooks.
Students are often late the day a paper is due. I had students form groups of four and as soon as they had four, they began the workshop. They were free to leave after they finished. Some groups used the full eighty minutes and some were done in an hour.
Facebook and Blogs as Instruments for World Peace?
When I started to make the mental move from basketball coach to writer (not that a person couldn’t be both) the two writer/teachers I began to read were Donald Murray and Peter Elbow. Many of the professors and teachers around me let me know that these two men were considered to be from the “expressive” school of composition and that if I followed their methods then my classroom would not be a place for political and social change. In the years that have followed, I have not found the warnings about expressivism’s lack of political impact to be true.
In the writing classrooms I inhabit, my students write in what Murray called a daybook (think writer’s journal) and they use Peter Elbow’s guidelines for sharing their work with one another, and what happens after that often takes on political implications for the classroom and beyond.
What follows are my notes for the reading of a text I choose because I’m thinking about technology, multimodal texts, and how those terms relate to the act of writing. The text did its work of giving me more to consider, but it also got me to thinking about the social and political change that occurs when people read and write together, whether this happens passing sheets of paper back and forth, posting on Facebook, or creating websites. If you have any doubt about a blog’s ability to spread any sort of message, take a glance at the map that goes with this blog and check out the location of some of its readers. Whoa.
Here are some “Golden Lines” and some of my thoughts related to Kathleen Blake Yancey’s “Made Not Only in Words: Composition in a New Key.” 56:2 CCC. December 2004.
- “Never before has the proliferation of writings outside the academy so counterpointed the compositions inside” (298). My students write regularly on blogs and I have them form groups to investigate an issue within writing studies, write a collaborative research paper, and present it to the class via a multimodal text. While those are activities within the courses I teach, I also talk daily about scholarly sources, signal phrases, parenthetical citations, and an MLA works cited page. I was just walking to class and thinking about how few of my students will use these “skills” (what else to call them?) after college. I was also thinking how rarely I use those skills in my writing. If I were a teacher and writer mostly publishing in scholarly journals, I would use these features of writing a lot, but I think of myself as a novelist, a short story writer, and an essayist. Most of the reading I do does not contain parenthetical citations. I hang onto to teaching that part of writing because my students are mostly just getting started at the university and I imagine that they will have to do this sort of writing to successfully navigate the university. If the latter is true (that students will read scholarly sources and write research papers) then I think the quote from the Yancey article that begins this bullet is an observation worth consideration.
- “How is it that what we teach and what we test can be so different from what our students know as writing?” (298). I want to take my students beyond what they know as writing. I want them to think critically about the texts that bombard them. I want them to equate writing with thinking, to begin to see the phrases that ripple across their mind as revisable thoughts.
- “At best, it could help foster a world peace never known before” (301). We weren’t blogging in my courses yet, but this sentence reminds me of my own classroom, where the Jewish immigrant from Russia became best friends with the Muslim student from Pakistan. These students wrote about the world was set up for them to hate one another but our classroom at St. John’s University became a space where they could work together and become friends.
- “At this moment, we need to focus on three changes: Develop a new curriculum; revisit and revise our writing-across-the-curriculum efforts; and develop a major in composition and rhetoric” (308). Sentences such as this one cause me to wonder my place in Writing Studies, as a professor with an MFA in Creative Writing and an MA in English Education. Writing Studies sounds like something to which I can belong while an Undergraduate Major in Composition sounds more like something within which I will always be slightly unqualified to teach, at least when it comes to my terminal degree.
- “In composition, we need to learn how to read and write e-texts–synthesizing, questioning, evaluating, and importing from them–databases and catalogues, hyper-texts and archives, Web essays and portfolios” (318). If you are already trying to teach students to be critical–to question information as it comes toward their thinking–then I don’t think this seems like such a big step, at least the first part. Read and write online, perhaps watch various online video including documentaries, and apply Yancey’s “synthesizing, questioning….” As I write this, I hear many of my students telling me how much they hate the “critical lens” assignment. Many of my students are being asked to do something they despise in whatever they mean when they say “critical lens.” I don’t think reading and writing have to be things to be dreaded.
- With regards to technology, especially something such as a set of Power Point Slides, “If we continue to partition it off as just something technical, or outside the parameters governing composing, or limit it to the screen of the course management system, or think of it in terms of the bells and whistles and templates of the PowerPoint screen, students in our classes learn only to fill in those electric boxes–which, in their ability to invite intellectual work, are the moral equivalent of the dots on a multiple choice test” (320). I think the E-Portfolio has the strong potential for becoming the new five paragraph essay, a prefabricated form which limits thinking.