An Elevator Pitch for HORSESHOE

Love on the Big Screen Flannery O'Connor Milledgeville Georgia College and State University
The Theater Pictured on Cover is in Milledgeville, Georgia. Home to Georgia College and Flannery O'Connor

There’s a big difference between what I learned doing an MFA Degree in Creative Writing at a place like Georgia College and what I’ve learned being in New York, reading for a literary agency, and beginning to hang around literary business types here.  Both experiences (my MFA and living here) have worked together to teach me a lot of what I want and need to know.

What I needed right away for life in NYC was an elevator pitch.  In other words, I needed to be able to summarize in one sentence what my book was about.  For Love on the Big Screen, it didn’t take me so long to come up with this:  Love on the Big Screen tells the story of Zuke, a college freshman whose understanding of love has been shaped by late-eighties romantic comedies.  People usually responded to this line with a laugh and publishing and film reps usually requested to read more after hearing that one sentence.

Love on the Big Screen Flannery O'Connor Milledgeville Georgia College and State University Winamac, Indiana, Horseshoe
Horseshoe will be set in a fictionalized Winamac, Indiana

So here I go again with a new book and a new need for 1 sentence summaries and a short synopsis.  Here’s where I am at:

In the rural town of Horseshoe, where everyone knows everybody else’s business, the lives of its citizens intertwine for thirteen bizarre tales of faith, sin, guilt, and deliverance.  Think:  Flannery O’Connor’s “Misfit” Fiction Meets Pulp Fiction.

Any of that catch your attention?

And here’s the short synopsis:

The little town of Horseshoe becomes the protagonist in this unique novel-in-stories format that bucks against the boundaries of time and asks readers to make the connections to put the story together.  The book initiates in the local grocery store where a churchwoman named Pam Scott delivers judgment on a philandering butcher.  Pam returns home, a place where each night she faces what is either a figment of her imagination or an increasingly terrifying knocker.  In this little town where everyone knows everybody else’s business, the lives of its citizens intertwine for thirteen bizarre tales of faith, sin, guilt, and deliverance.

I wrote both the one-sentence summary and the short synopsis in conversation with the team at Cherokee McGhee.  As I say in class all the time, “Writing Floats on a Sea of Conversation.”  Without conversation, I don’t have much to say.  If you’ll look over there to the right of the page, you’ll find all the virtual places where we might chat up reading, writing, and teaching.

Cherokee McGhee, Love on the Big Screen, Horseshoe, William Torgerson, Tarantino, O'Connor, Pulp Fiction, 80s, Lloyd Dobler, Farmer Ted, John Hughes
Cherokee McGhee Press: publisher of Love on the Big Screen and Horseshoe

Waiting For Julie: Help me plan the novel after Love on the Big Screen?

Zuke Love on the Big Screen Waiting for Julie William Torgerson
Click here to Meet Zuke in Love on the Big Screen

Agents, publicists, publishers, and various professionals in the film industry often ask for writers to “pitch” their projects in a couple sentences or less.  Last weekend at the New Jersey Council for Teachers of English (NJCTE) conference, I told a room full of writers and teachers that I’d like to know my couple-sentence summary before I start writing.  This morning I was working on that pitch for the book I’m writing next, a book I’m at the moment calling Waiting For Julie. I’m going to share a couple versions of my summary and I’d love to hear if you’ve got suggestions or if one of these appeals to you more than the rest:

  • Meet Zuke:  a young man who wants to be married and jumps at the chance when his buddy offers to introduce him to a woman he says will be perfect for him.  Zuke meets Julie and he falls for her hard, but as the relationship progresses, he begins to wonder just how long a man can wait for a woman to start loving him back.
  • In Waiting For Julie, Zuke is a basketball coach who wants to be married.  When his buddy tells him he knows just the right girl, Zuke is all for meeting her.  After a rocky start, Zuke falls hard and asks Julie out.  When she says “yes,” Zuke is ecstatic, but as they begin to date, Julie doesn’t seem like him as much as he likes her.  Zuke wonders how long a guy ought to wait to be loved back.
  • Zuke’s buddy Cheese thinks he knows the perfect woman that Zuke’s got to meet.   When Zuke meets this woman named Julie,  it’s clear to him that she’s in love with Cheese.   Eventually Zuke asks Julie out on a date, and he’s pumped when she says yes, but as the relationship progresses, he begins to wonder just how long a man should wait on the woman of his dreams.

Possible Script Logline:  Just How Long Can A Man Wait on The Girl of His Dreams?

Rhetorical Problems for Me:  This could be a man’s book in that Zuke’s a basketball coach with manly feelings that he keeps to himself as he gets involved trying to woo this gal Julie, but I’m not sure a man would buy a book called Waiting For Julie.  Hmmmmmmm.

Upcoming Appearances

Saturday, February 26     Storrs, Connecticut.  Saturday Seminar with the Connecticut Writing Project on Research Writing.

Tuesday, March 1               Kankakee, Illinois.  Reading at Olivet Nazarene University.  7:00

Tuesday, March 8              Logansport, Indiana.  Author Reading at the Nest.  11:00.

Saturday, March 5.           Winamac, Indiana.  Author Reading at the Town Library.  1:00.

Saturday, March 12.         Fort Wayne, Indiana.  Book signing at Firefly Coffee Shop.  10:00.

Saturday, March 26.         Montclair State New Jersey.  New Jersey Council For Teachers of English.  Presentation.

Friday, May 13-15.            Jefferson, Texas.  The Fred McKenzie Storytelling Book Festival

Adaptation of Love on the Big Screen selected for grand prize at Flickers Rhode Island International Film Festival

Love on the Big Screen tells the story of a college freshman whose understanding of love has been shaped by late-eighties romantic comedies.  The novel is forthcoming from Cherokee McGhee Press in early 2011 and the script adaptation has been selected for the Grand Prize in the Flickers Rhode Island International Film Festival Screenplay Competition.  Click the picture below to read more about the festival and the selection of Love on the Big Screen.
William Torgerson's Love on the Big Screen adaptation selected for Grand Prize at Flickers Rhode Island International Film Festival
Love on the Big Screen adaptation selected for Grand Prize at Flickers Rhode Island International Film Festival