College Writers on the Craft of Writing (podcast link at bottom)

Each semester the past couple of years the First Year Writing Program at St. John’s University holds a conference called “Coming to Writing.”  My colleague Tara Roeder was one of the faculty members who came up with the name and it comes from Hélène Cixous, a writer Tara describes as her favorite, fabulous, French feminist.  Here’s a quote that has previously been used on the conference program.

“I sensed that there was a beyond, to which I did not have access, an unlimited place […] A desire was seeking its home. I was that desire. I was the question. The question with this strange destiny: to seek, to pursue the answers that will appease it…
—Hélène Cixous in “Coming to Writing”

I moderated a panel discussion of students I worked with during the semester, recorded the session, and published the session as a podcast with their permission.  I can certainly spot ways in which many of them were, as Cixous describes, in pursuit of answers.  What follows here is the title of our panel and a description of the work the students discussed.

Writers on the Craft of Writing

Like it or not, these students had to be writers this semester.  They wrote two blog posts a week and created a documentary film as a culminating writing project.  Here’s a list of the students who presented and what it was that most struck me about their work:

  • Brianne revolutionized the way many of us thought about how a dean might work with students in his or her respective college.  She talked with deans from many of our colleges at St. John’s and then surprised most of us when her exhaustive interviews of students revealed that many students communicate with their deans regularly.
  • Tahyanna is a funny and smart writer who I think ought to write a memoir something along the lines of Confessions of a Germaphobe.  (I don’t think she’s going to do it)  During the “Coming to Writing Conference,” Tahyanna talked about her writing process for the final paper, an assignment I call “A Writer on Writing.”  I make my students (no sense in saying I ask them to do it)  something we call an “annotation.”  For annotations, students  print out articles and take notes on them.  Tahynna explained how she put all her annotations out in front of her and looked at her written comments on the articles as a way of organizing how she was going to write the paper.
  • Miriam was the only student I had who referenced the only poem we looked at all semester as a way of thinking about images.  Although Miriam wrote about several topics, I remember her for writing about the environment.  In one of her pieces she wrote about a sort of paradoxical beauty, that oil in a puddle of water can be beautiful:  “Some puddles are murky, quiet as to how deep they really are.  Others are crystal clear, reflecting the fiery fall foliage.  Others seem to have life.  An intermingling of swirling colors…these puddles have harnessed their own rainbows.”
  • Michael came up with a theme for his blog:  conflict.  What impressed me most about his work (aside from his sometimes encyclopedic knowledge of the Middle East) was the savvy and empathy he showed entering into controversial topics.  Rather than lighting up our classroom with angry argument, Michael fostered ideas of tolerance and conversation meant to help us all understand many points of view.
  • Diana says she comes from family that immigrated from the Soviet Union to Israel where she was born, and that she considers herself an American.  These identities informed her writing in which she used the various generations of her family to underpin the structure of her final portfolio.  She also alludes to a terrible nickname given to her by a former teacher:  ESL, she was called, because her teacher felt she spoke using poor grammar.  Way to go dude.
  • Kevin started off not sure if he wanted to write about working on cars or the fact that he switched his concentration of study to nursing.  He took a practical approach to the work of the class and interviewed coworkers at the hospital, gathered information about graduate schools in nursing, and read numerous scholarly articles in his field.  If I was ever in need of someone to look after my health, I’d trust Kevin completely.
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Tahyna and Miriam Intellectually Browse in the Library

Thanks to my colleague April Julier for organizing this semester’s conference.  The audio podcast of our panel discussion is available below.  If you take the time to listen, I wonder how you envision the college composition course?  Perhaps you are someone who says you are getting students ready to take it?  Maybe you’re headed for school yourself or had a very different experience when you were a student?  And of course there are other teachers of writing who have very different takes on what this class can be.  Love to hear from you regarding your thoughts on the sort of writing you’ve experienced connected to the first year writing course.

You can connect to the podcast here or search for “digital book club” on iTunes.  Thanks for checking this out.

Write With Me Wednesdays: Tell Your Readers a Story

“Write With Me Wednesdays” is a series of blog posts, YouTube videos, and iTunes podcasts that is designed to help get you writing and also thinking about the craft of writing.  Thanks to the Jeremy Vogt Band for providing this weeks music for the video and iTunes published podcast.  I’m filling this post with relevant links despite my own personal goal of trying to stay focused on what I am reading online without just mindlessly clicking around.   If you’re just getting started with us, you might consider the writing territories activity as a way to look at all the possibilities for your writing.

In this weeks’ installment we’re going to look at the ways in which writers can tell a story to open a piece of writing.  I remember when I heard young adult novelist Walter Dean Myers speak at a New Jersey Council for Teachers of English Conference. I had been feeling uneasy about the way I’d been doing readings of Love on the Big Screen at conferences, book stores, and in libraries, and not liked how I’d kept my nose in a book for much of my talks.  It used to be that I’d followed a guideline I’d heard Rick Pitino share at one of his coaching clinics:  when you give a talk, don’t check your notes.  Pitino said that he’d rather look his audience in the eye and interact with them than to remember every little thing that he’d intended to say. I’d always subscribed to that philosophy, but the publication of my book led me away from eye contact and back to the pages of my notes.

When I heard Walter Dean Myers, he told us the stories of his books:  where the ideas came from, how he researched them by visiting prisons, and homes for children, and when he was finished–after not reading a page from any of his books–people were moved by the stories and went running over to the book table to purchase one of his novels.  I think he had something like three books coming out that year.

So your instruction for this week is to open a post by telling a story.  In many cases, the story might be the entire post.  The story is relevant because it is somehow connected to what you write about on your blog.  Here are some first-line examples from writers who opened their texts by beginning a story:

I think it was the penny loafers that started it all.

–appeared in article entitled “From Candy Girls to Cyber-Sista Cipher: Narrating Black Females Color,” written by Dr. Carmen Kynard and published in the Harvard Educational Review.

When I think about my writing within the context of other writers’ work, I often ask myself questions.  “When did it all get started for me?” I might ask.  And this could be connected to anything. When did I first think I might write a novel?  When did I think I wasn’t going to be a fireman (as I’d wanted to be as a kid) and when did I start thinking about being a college professor?  I also love Carmen’s text for the ways that it challenges definitions about what it means to do academic writing.  This is a text that, after all, that alludes to the 80s band New Edition.  I can hear some who’d say New Edition doesn’t belong in academic writing, but I’d say it depends on the purpose of the writing and what it is about.  Evidently, the Harvard Educational Review thought New Edition belonged in this case.

I was saved from sin when I was going on thirteen. But not really saved. It happened like this.

by Langston Hughes in “Salvation”

Notice Langston’s  fragment. Notice also the interest he creates with this idea that he was saved but not really.  What does he mean?  We have to keep reading to find out.  He’s also got that great phrase, “It happened like this.”  And as a reader we know we’re going to hear a story from when Langston was a boy.

Last week a blogging friend and I were talking about comments and community.

Deb Ng’s blog, Kommein

What Deb Ng’s sentence has me thinking about is the way in which we can give our subconscious an assignment:  find blog posts!  Or our subconscious gets used to the fact that we write blog posts, and then we’re standing on the street talking to a friend, and we realize we are in the midst of what will become a future post or text that we want to write.  Not sure that’s how it worked for Deb in this case, (maybe she’ll tell us?) but it’s often how it works for me.

A Good One: Hornby's Juliet, Naked

This way of the subconscious (or the product of habit) reminds me of a writer I like named Nick Hornby.  I recommend his High Fidelity or Juliet, Naked to you.  Not so long ago he collaborated with another favorite artist of mine:  the musician Ben Folds.  Nick wrote the lyrics and Ben did the rest.  I’ve heard Hornby talk about the subconscious (he didn’t use that word) by saying at first he had little stories he’d give to Ben, but what ended up happening was that he’d start to “see” or “find” songs.  He’d be walking down the street and think, “there’s a song for Ben.”  So once you start writing, your mind will get to working all the time on what is coming up.  Where will you put these ideas as they come?  A voice memo on your phone, a notebook, or perhaps as some sort of digital text?  As I’ve moved from being a writer’s notebook kind of guy to an iPhone user, I find myself missing a lot of ideas as they go whizzing by.  If you’ve got suggestions, I’d love you send them to me via a comment on this post.

Deb Ng knows her subject matter.  Her everyday life is full of topics for writing just like yours.   You just have to develop the habit of looking for them.  A conversation becomes a post.

If any of this prompts some thinking on your part, I’d love to hear from you via a comment.  Maybe consider leaving me and any potential readers a link to where you’ve tried to open a piece of writing by telling a story.  Thanks again to The Jeremy Vogt Band for providing the music for this weeks’ YouTube video and iTunes podcast. You can find the podcast by typing in “Digital Book Club” on iTunes.  You can listen to podcast online here.  There’s a video version also included below:

Write With Me Wednesdays: Create Your Writing Territories

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Directions:  Respond to the following prompts to create your writing territories.  Perhaps you want to copy and paste these prompts into your blog and post your responses.  If you use this activity for your writing, I invite you to leave your blog address via a comment to this post.

  1. Make a list of topics you know a lot about, or if that puts too much pressure on you, make a list of things you know something about.
  2. List the main parts and/or roles in your life.  For example, I’m a professor, a novelist, a husband, a father, a runner, and much more.
  3. Make a list of places you know well.
  4. What are you working on right now?  What projects/work do you have going that might make for good writing topics?
  5. Make a list of topics that you wish you knew more about, or list some things you’d like to be trained in.  You could go out and learn (maybe interview others) and bring the news of your learning back to your audience.
  6. Do a sample schedule of your life.  Try out a weekday, a weekend, summertime, or a holiday.  At 8:00 a.m. you….  And then you…  The idea is that there are topics buried everywhere in each minute of your life.  You just need to be on the lookout for them.
  7. List some political/social issues relevant to your life.

So You Created the Territories, Now What?

  1. Look over the words and phrases you’ve listed and use them to come up with projects for writing.  You might see something that reminds you of a story or you might find a word or phrase that triggers an idea for what you can tell your readers about.  If it’s something you want to know (Why do I keep ending up in these relationships or how do I enter a film in a festival?) then you can take your readers on a journey with you.
  2. Do you want to post your writing territories?  You could explain that you are going to write along with us and that you are posting your writing territories as a blog post.  You could also probably post them as a comment to this post.
  3. After completing the territories, I’d love it if you would post a reflection as comment here about how the activity went for you.
  4. You might want to just jump right to the writing. I suggest that you tell us a story or tell us about one of the words or phrases that you have listed while responding to the prompts.
  5. If you’ve already got a project underway, (as I do) then post an excerpt from that work on your blog and show how it comes out of your territories.  I plan to post something that comes from my writing territories next Monday, November 21, 2011.
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